landing desc

Author: mikehoffms

microsoft-edge/progressive-web-apps-chromium/landing/index.yml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ### YamlMime:Landing
 # landing page for PWA portion of docset
-title: Progressive Web Apps documentation
-summary: Develop a Progressive Web App (PWA).
+title: Progressive Web Apps (PWAs) documentation
+summary: Develop a web app that has a progressive UX and can run on all devices, from one codebase.  Provide a native-like UX, or run in the browser.  # < 160 chars; cursor 169
 
 metadata:
   # title: default to root title above. # Required; page title displayed in search results. Include the brand. < 60 chars.
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ landingContent:
 
 # =============================================================================
 # Card r1c3
-  - title: Publish and integrate with the Microsoft Store
+  - title: Publish PWAs with the Microsoft Store
     linkLists:
       - linkListType: how-to-guide
         links:
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ landingContent:
 
 # =============================================================================
 # Card r2c1
-  - title: Update a PWA and alert the user with badges, notifications, and push messages
+  - title: Update a PWA, alert with badges, notifications, push messages
     linkLists:
       - linkListType: how-to-guide
         links:

microsoft-edge/toc.yml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # =============================================================================
-# Sections:
+# TOC sections:
 # top leaf nodes (landing, docset overview)
 # DevTools
 # DevTools for VS Code (within DevTools)
@@ -1171,9 +1171,9 @@
 
 # top =========================================================================
 # PWA
-    - name: Progressive Web Apps (PWAs)
+    - name: Progressive Web Apps
       items:
-        - name: Progressive Web Apps documentation
+        - name: Progressive Web Apps (PWAs) documentation
           href: ./progressive-web-apps-chromium/landing/index.yml
           displayName: landing
 
@@ -1217,7 +1217,7 @@
             - name: Provide in-app purchases with the Digital Goods API
               href: ./progressive-web-apps-chromium/how-to/digital-goods-api.md
 
-        - name: Update a PWA and alert the user with badges, notifications, and push messages
+        - name: Update a PWA, alert with badges, notifications, push messages
           items:
             - name: Synchronize and update a PWA in the background
               href: ./progressive-web-apps-chromium/how-to/background-syncs.md