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Author: mikehoffms

microsoft-edge/extensions-chromium/developer-guide/alternate-distribution-options.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Alternative ways to distribute an extension
-description: How to distribute extensions using alternate methods that don't use verified browser extension stores.
+description: How to distribute a Microsoft Edge extension by using alternate methods that don't use verified browser extension stores.
 author: MSEdgeTeam
 ms.author: msedgedevrel
 ms.topic: conceptual
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.date: 05/05/2023
 per https://developer.chrome.com/docs/extensions/how-to/distribute/install-extensions
 -->
 
-Generally, an extension is distributed by publishing it at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).  There are some scenarios where you might need to distribute an extension by using alternate methods.  For example:
+Generally, a Microsoft Edge extension is distributed by publishing it at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).  There are some scenarios where you might need to distribute an extension by using alternate methods.  For example:
 
 1. The extension is associated with other software, and it should be installed together with the rest of the bundled software.
 

microsoft-edge/extensions-chromium/index.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Overview of Microsoft Edge extensions
-description: An overview of building and publishing Microsoft Edge Extensions.
+description: An overview of building and publishing Microsoft Edge extensions.
 author: MSEdgeTeam
 ms.author: msedgedevrel
 ms.topic: conceptual
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ After you've successfully submitted your extension, your extension undergoes a r
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 ## The Featured badge
 
-A **Featured** badge in [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/) indicates that the extension has been determined to follow Microsoft's recommended best practices related to security, privacy, transparency, and user experience.
+A **Featured** badge is displayed on some extension listings at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).  The **Featured** badge indicates that the extension has been determined to follow Microsoft's recommended best practices related to security, privacy, transparency, and user experience.
 
 ![The Featured badge to the right of the extension name](./index-images/featured-badge.png)
 

microsoft-edge/extensions-chromium/publish/add-ons-curation.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.date: 10/13/2023
 
 The Microsoft Edge extensions team curates the experience at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/) so that users can find all the items to customize their browser in one place, such as themes, extensions, and apps.
 
-Available _items_ to customize the user's browser includes themes, extensions, and apps.
+Available _items_ to customize the user's browser include themes, extensions, and apps.
 
 Before installing an item from [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/), users can learn more about the functionality, data permissions, and publisher by viewing the item's description and listing.
 
@@ -25,12 +25,15 @@ Items at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/),
 Users can discover extensions they're interested in at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/) in several ways, including:
 * The home page.
 * The Search bar.
-* Curated collections of extensions at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).
-* Categories of extensions at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).
+* Curated collections of extensions.
+* Categories of extensions.
 
 The following factors are used to organize items:
+
 * **Quality:** Extensions that are featured at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/) are selected based on their eligibility criteria.
+
 * **Relevancy:** Ranking takes into consideration factors such as the item name, description relevancy, popularity, and user experience.
+
 * **Popularity:** The number of ratings and the average rating are used for prioritizing items.
 
 
@@ -42,7 +45,7 @@ The quality and compliance of the item that's displayed at [Microsoft Edge Add-o
 Extensions that violate the policy guidelines are not allowed at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons](https://microsoftedge.microsoft.com/addons/).  There is a standard review process for each new item submission and new versions of items, per the developer policies.
 
 See also:
-* [Using Content Security Policy (CSP) to control which resources can be run](../developer-guide/csp.md)
+* [Developer policies for the Microsoft Edge Add-ons store](/legal/microsoft-edge/extensions/developer-policies)
 
 
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@@ -55,7 +58,7 @@ Every item (such as theme, extension, or app) that's published at [Microsoft Edg
 * Publisher information.
 * Links to the publisher site, privacy policies, and financial policies.
 
-The Search ranking of the item is based on these characteristics.
+The search ranking of the item is based on these characteristics.
 
 
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@@ -69,5 +72,4 @@ Items are ranked for popularity based on user ratings at [Microsoft Edge Add-ons
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 ## See also
 
-* [Using Content Security Policy (CSP) to control which resources can be run](../developer-guide/csp.md)
 * [Developer policies for extensions at Microsoft Edge Add-ons](/legal/microsoft-edge/extensions/developer-policies)