Address review comments

Author: captainbrosset

microsoft-edge/web-platform/release-notes/133.md

@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ Adds the `Atomics.pause` method, to hint to the CPU that the current code is exe
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 ###### CSP hash reporting for scripts
 
-Complex web applications often need to keep a record of the subresources that they download, for security purposes.  In particular, upcoming industry standards and best practices (such as PCI-DSS v4)<!-- todo: link? --> require that web applications keep an inventory of all the scripts they download and execute.
+Complex web applications often need to keep a record of the subresources that they download, for security purposes.  In particular, upcoming industry standards and best practices (such as [PCI-DSS v4](https://east.pcisecuritystandards.org/document_library?category=pcidss&document=pci_dss)) require that web applications keep an inventory of all the scripts they download and execute.
 
-This feature builds on CSP<!-- todo: expand --> and the Reporting API to report the URLs and hashes (for CORS/same-origin)<!-- todo: punc. --> of all the script resources that the document loads.
+This feature builds on Content Security Policy (CSP) and the Reporting API to report the URLs and hashes of all the script resources that the document loads.
 
 
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@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ The `text-box-trim` property specifies the sides to trim (above or below).  The
 
 These properties allow you to control vertical spacing precisely, by using the font metrics.
 
-`ideographic` and `ideographic-ink`, two values for the `text-box-edge` property for CJK,<!-- todo: expand CJK --> are deferred to a future release.
+`ideographic` and `ideographic-ink`, two values for the `text-box-edge` property for Chinese, Japanese, and Korean (CJK) characters are deferred to a future release.
 
 
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@@ -125,10 +125,10 @@ This feature adds a DOM primitive (`moveBefore`) that allows moving an element a
 
 When moving an element instead of removing or inserting an element, state such as the following is preserved:
 
-* iframes remain loaded.
+* `<iframe>` elements remain loaded.
 * The active element retains focus.
-* Popovers, fullscreen dialogs,<!-- todo: windows? --> and modal dialogs remain open.
-* CSS transitions and animations remain running.
+* Popovers and dialogs remain open.
+* CSS transitions and animations continue to run.
 
 
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@@ -140,11 +140,9 @@ For completeness, the attribute on `<area>` is exposed with identical syntax and
 
 
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-###### Expose coarsened cross-origin `renderTime` in element timing/LCP (regardless of TAO)
+###### Expose coarsened cross-origin `renderTime` in element timing and Largest Contentful Paint (LCP) regardless of the `Timing-Allow-Origin` (TAO) header
 
-<!-- todo: expand 'TAO' -->
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-All element-timing and `LargestContentfulPaint` (LCP) performance entries would have a non-zero `renderTime`, even if they are cross-origin without `Timing-Allow-Origin`.  All presentation timestamps (`renderTime`, paint timing start time, and event timing end time) will be coarsened to a multiple of 4ms, to reduce the risk of reading cross-origin image information.
+All element-timing and LCP performance entries would have a non-zero `renderTime`, even if they are cross-origin without a `Timing-Allow-Origin` header.  All presentation timestamps (`renderTime`, paint timing start time, and event timing end time) will be coarsened to a multiple of 4ms, to reduce the risk of reading cross-origin image information.
 
 
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@@ -226,7 +224,7 @@ Adds additional vertex formats that weren't present in the initial release of We
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 ###### X25519 algorithm of the Web Cryptography API
 
-The X25519 algorithm provides tools to perform key agreement by using the X25519 function that's specified in RFC7748.<!-- todo: link? -->  The `X25519` algorithm identifier can be used in the `SubtleCrypto` interface to access the implemented operations: `generateKey`, `importKey`, `exportKey`, `deriveKey`, and `deriveBits`.
+The X25519 algorithm provides tools to perform key agreement by using the X25519 function that's specified in [RFC7748](https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7748.html). The `X25519` algorithm identifier can be used in the `SubtleCrypto` interface to access the implemented operations: `generateKey`, `importKey`, `exportKey`, `deriveKey`, and `deriveBits`.
 
 
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